Thursday, June 08, 2006

together

their eyes locked, from across the room, in silent intimacy.
with the hubbub that surrounded them, they were suddenly alone.

...what had passed between them becoming more real than the reality that enclosed them.
only they knew what no one else would know. ever.

their's was a communion of the soul that took place when they communicated what words could not.

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ps: i tried.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Amazing what a single word can really mean. Very, very cool!

mayya said...

really well written :)

Anonymous said...

Asalam Alaikum

Good Job !

I really liked this entry. It's totally my flavor of writing. The taste is the same and the look of ur blog is gr8 too.

G00d job again !

apna khayal rakhna
hope 2 c u around blogs
Khuda Hafiz

Amira Zaidi said...

hey thats so abstract.. i liked it! hope u're doing well.. ok this is gonna sound really dumb.. can someone teach me how to do the list of other bloggers on mine? it just makes it a lot more interactive.. Thanks..

Amira Zaidi said...

man i am technically challenged.. well i just managed to add links.. now i'm waiting for your guys comments. cheers!

Anonymous said...

silent intimacy.

That's SO Nadiya Saeed :)

vintage said...

over a mile: i know! i racked my brains, but couldn't come up with something that would have 'together' in it. so i kindoff decided to write something that signified it... in any way :)

mayya: hello there stranger :P it's been a while since i've seen U here :)

rung-e-hayat:<--i hope i got that right :) i'm glad you could relate to my blog, both in content and aesthetics :)

amira: visited. commented. will email u soon with instructions of finding your way around blogspot :)

bayl: bayl oh bayl :) i couldn't think of a phrase that would be more appropriate. i learnt a lot in her class... :)